Monday, March 24, 2014
Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Chapter 5
The theme of chapter five is making choices. Here are five quotes that support this theme:
"I knew my mother was considering sending me away, but I never thought she'd actually do it. The final straw... [was when Riverdale placed] me on academic and disciplinary probation." (Moore 87)
This quote shows what led up to an important decision being made by Wes' mother. It's hard for a mother to send her child away for any reason, but in the end sending Wes to military school ended up being the right decision, as it set him on the right track.
"I began to lightly punch her in the arm," (Moore 87)
This quote shows that in the mindset Wes was in before military school, the only thing he could do for entertainment was hit people. A result of years of questionable decisions, it ended up landing him in military school.
"The directions he had given me were fake." (Moore 93)
This quote shows Wes' decision to blindly follow everyone and believe everyone and what they say. This shows his lack of initiative to think for himself, as he had begun to give up upon arriving at Valley Forge.
"Within two months of their meeting, Alicia told Wes that her period was late." (Moore 99)
This is a result of an in-the-moment decision that Wes made. Looking bad, he messed up. He's far too young and irresponsible to take care of a child, but he must do to a bad decision.
"Wes and his friend traded shots and finally heard Ray scream as he fell behind a black Toyota just fifty feet from his house." (Moore 105)
This terrible decision Wes made was driven entirely by anger. Again, looking back, he wishes he could take it back, but in-the-moment decisions are hard to make because often the right one goes against your instincts.
"I knew my mother was considering sending me away, but I never thought she'd actually do it. The final straw... [was when Riverdale placed] me on academic and disciplinary probation." (Moore 87)
This quote shows what led up to an important decision being made by Wes' mother. It's hard for a mother to send her child away for any reason, but in the end sending Wes to military school ended up being the right decision, as it set him on the right track.
"I began to lightly punch her in the arm," (Moore 87)
This quote shows that in the mindset Wes was in before military school, the only thing he could do for entertainment was hit people. A result of years of questionable decisions, it ended up landing him in military school.
"The directions he had given me were fake." (Moore 93)
This quote shows Wes' decision to blindly follow everyone and believe everyone and what they say. This shows his lack of initiative to think for himself, as he had begun to give up upon arriving at Valley Forge.
"Within two months of their meeting, Alicia told Wes that her period was late." (Moore 99)
This is a result of an in-the-moment decision that Wes made. Looking bad, he messed up. He's far too young and irresponsible to take care of a child, but he must do to a bad decision.
"Wes and his friend traded shots and finally heard Ray scream as he fell behind a black Toyota just fifty feet from his house." (Moore 105)
This terrible decision Wes made was driven entirely by anger. Again, looking back, he wishes he could take it back, but in-the-moment decisions are hard to make because often the right one goes against your instincts.
Characterization Sonnets
The Author, Wes Moore
When this sonnet shall be complete
It shall characterize the author, Wes.
He is detailed, this'll be no small feat
But to correctly portray him I'll try my best.
A funny kid, be too lazy he could,
Was torn between two worlds
Too poor for some and too rich for the hood
But Kid Kupid did get the girls.
He allowed his problems to get to him
And continued to spiral down
When his mother decides his future looked dim,
To Valley Forge he was sent, out of town.
With time, what he faced looked no longer dark
His old wound had been healed, and left not a mark.
The Other Wes Moore
When to him I shall refer
Let me call him the other Wes Moore.
For Wes to study his brother preferred
Despite himself dealing through Baltimore.
"Do as I say and not as I do!"
Was his brother's advice to Wes;
But dealing drugs became Wes' game too
For to be like his brother he tried his best.
He loved his mother and strove not to deceive
But the money he couldn't explain
So he told her a lie that she believed
Until she found his stash of cocaine.
Wes, just a child and good at heart
But his wrongdoings tore his family apart.
When this sonnet shall be complete
It shall characterize the author, Wes.
He is detailed, this'll be no small feat
But to correctly portray him I'll try my best.
A funny kid, be too lazy he could,
Was torn between two worlds
Too poor for some and too rich for the hood
But Kid Kupid did get the girls.
He allowed his problems to get to him
And continued to spiral down
When his mother decides his future looked dim,
To Valley Forge he was sent, out of town.
With time, what he faced looked no longer dark
His old wound had been healed, and left not a mark.
The Other Wes Moore
When to him I shall refer
Let me call him the other Wes Moore.
For Wes to study his brother preferred
Despite himself dealing through Baltimore.
"Do as I say and not as I do!"
Was his brother's advice to Wes;
But dealing drugs became Wes' game too
For to be like his brother he tried his best.
He loved his mother and strove not to deceive
But the money he couldn't explain
So he told her a lie that she believed
Until she found his stash of cocaine.
Wes, just a child and good at heart
But his wrongdoings tore his family apart.
Monday, March 10, 2014
Chapter 4
The theme of chapter four involves crime and punishment. Here are five quotes that support this theme:
"'Wes is out here hustling! I told him to leave this alone, but he won't listen!'" (Moore 70)
This is the first example of the other Wes' involvement in major crime. He is following in his brother's influence and selling drugs.
"She took the boxes into the bathroom, lifted their tops, and emptied the contents into the toilet." (Moore 73)
This is Wes' punishment for selling drugs: his mother makes them disappear, sending Wes into a rage.
"'That was over four thousand dollars in drugs! I have to pay someone back for that!'" (Moore 74)
This quote from Wes shows why he is so angry. By getting himself into such a dark business, he has the opportunity for big money, but can be put into very tight situations if mistakes are made. Owing someone four grand, especially in drug money, isn't good news.
"Nobody could ever deny I was there. Not even me as a police cruiser rolled up around the corner." (Moore 81)
Switching to the author Wes Moore. Less serious crime (graffiti), but crime nonetheless.
"'I hope you really listened to what I told you,' he whispered in my ear, opening up the other cuff to let both of my hands free." (Moore 84)
In his case, the cops let him go. This was especially rare because of his race since it was the 1980s. Another reason the author progressed: second chances. On the other hand, the other Wes Moore was forced deeper into the drug game to make up the four grand.
"'Wes is out here hustling! I told him to leave this alone, but he won't listen!'" (Moore 70)
This is the first example of the other Wes' involvement in major crime. He is following in his brother's influence and selling drugs.
"She took the boxes into the bathroom, lifted their tops, and emptied the contents into the toilet." (Moore 73)
This is Wes' punishment for selling drugs: his mother makes them disappear, sending Wes into a rage.
"'That was over four thousand dollars in drugs! I have to pay someone back for that!'" (Moore 74)
This quote from Wes shows why he is so angry. By getting himself into such a dark business, he has the opportunity for big money, but can be put into very tight situations if mistakes are made. Owing someone four grand, especially in drug money, isn't good news.
"Nobody could ever deny I was there. Not even me as a police cruiser rolled up around the corner." (Moore 81)
Switching to the author Wes Moore. Less serious crime (graffiti), but crime nonetheless.
"'I hope you really listened to what I told you,' he whispered in my ear, opening up the other cuff to let both of my hands free." (Moore 84)
In his case, the cops let him go. This was especially rare because of his race since it was the 1980s. Another reason the author progressed: second chances. On the other hand, the other Wes Moore was forced deeper into the drug game to make up the four grand.
Monday, March 3, 2014
Fathers and Angels Title Justification
The Other Wes Moore, by Wes Moore, is a story about two kids named Wes Moore with very similar backgrounds. One, the author, was a Rhodes scholar and went on to an extremely successful career. The other Wes Moore is in prison serving a life sentence. The first section of this book is titled "Fathers and Angels" and is largely about the presence of their fathers, or lack there of, and the effect this had on their lives.
This Section is called Fathers and Angels because the main characters' fathers play confusing, but important roles in their lives. "Angels" is included in the title because Wes' father is dead. The first chapter contains actual memories of the two Wes' fathers. The author's memory of his father is his death: "He died on a Friday night." The other Wes Moore's memory of his father went more along the lines of this: "A man sat on the couch leaning precariously to the side... The strong smell of whiskey wafted from his clothes and his pores.... 'Wes, meet your father.'" These two memories are very different, and affected the two Wes' futures differently.
The difference in how the two Wes' remember their fathers ties into how their respective lives took different paths, which is important enough to name the section about their relationships with their fathers. For Wes, the author, his father died when he was very young, and hear nothing but good things about him growing up. This created a perfect role model to look up to despite the lack of a physical presence. This perfect role model helped shape Wes' extremely successful journey. The other Wes, however, met his father once. This one meeting involved his father drunk and sitting on a couch. This image provided no form of a role model and was a huge disappointment to Wes. This early, subtle difference was the first that put the two Wes' on different paths.
This Section is called Fathers and Angels because the main characters' fathers play confusing, but important roles in their lives. "Angels" is included in the title because Wes' father is dead. The first chapter contains actual memories of the two Wes' fathers. The author's memory of his father is his death: "He died on a Friday night." The other Wes Moore's memory of his father went more along the lines of this: "A man sat on the couch leaning precariously to the side... The strong smell of whiskey wafted from his clothes and his pores.... 'Wes, meet your father.'" These two memories are very different, and affected the two Wes' futures differently.
The difference in how the two Wes' remember their fathers ties into how their respective lives took different paths, which is important enough to name the section about their relationships with their fathers. For Wes, the author, his father died when he was very young, and hear nothing but good things about him growing up. This created a perfect role model to look up to despite the lack of a physical presence. This perfect role model helped shape Wes' extremely successful journey. The other Wes, however, met his father once. This one meeting involved his father drunk and sitting on a couch. This image provided no form of a role model and was a huge disappointment to Wes. This early, subtle difference was the first that put the two Wes' on different paths.
Chapter Three
The theme of chapter three is fitting in. Here are five quotes that support this theme:
"But Justin and I were the only two who actually went all the way across town to attend a predominantly white private school." (Moore 49)
This entire section is about Wes trying and failing to fit in, both with his Riverdale friends and his neighborhood friends. This shows one big reason that he doesn't fit in with his neighborhood friends: he goes to Riverdale.
"For my friends, I decided to juice the story up a little. Or a lot." (Moore 50)
This quote is in reference to a story Wes told to his neighborhood friends about his suspension from Riverdale. He was desperately trying to fit in with them by sounding tough, when in reality he was suspended for a play fight resulting in a small cut.
"We tried to keep a bop in our step, tried to keep it cool," (Moore 52)
This is Wes walking home with Justin. They are rushing home because they are terrified of the crime that comes out after dark. However, even with this motive, they try hard to fit in by playing it cool.
"I would rotate their order, mixing and matching so that each day I had on a fresh combination." (Moore 52)
Here, Moore is referring to his clothes. This time, he is trying to impress his Riverdale friends by using a pattern to make it seem as if he has a lot of clothes, wanting to appear rich.
"I was becoming too 'rich' for the kids from the neighborhood and too 'poor' for the kids at school." (Moore 53)
This quote is a perfect summary of the whole section. He was spending all of his time trying to fit in with two polar opposites, and he ended up fitting in no where. To close out this section, Moore describes how his dedication to fitting in eventually led to a derailment of his life, such as letting his grades slip.
"But Justin and I were the only two who actually went all the way across town to attend a predominantly white private school." (Moore 49)
This entire section is about Wes trying and failing to fit in, both with his Riverdale friends and his neighborhood friends. This shows one big reason that he doesn't fit in with his neighborhood friends: he goes to Riverdale.
"For my friends, I decided to juice the story up a little. Or a lot." (Moore 50)
This quote is in reference to a story Wes told to his neighborhood friends about his suspension from Riverdale. He was desperately trying to fit in with them by sounding tough, when in reality he was suspended for a play fight resulting in a small cut.
"We tried to keep a bop in our step, tried to keep it cool," (Moore 52)
This is Wes walking home with Justin. They are rushing home because they are terrified of the crime that comes out after dark. However, even with this motive, they try hard to fit in by playing it cool.
"I would rotate their order, mixing and matching so that each day I had on a fresh combination." (Moore 52)
Here, Moore is referring to his clothes. This time, he is trying to impress his Riverdale friends by using a pattern to make it seem as if he has a lot of clothes, wanting to appear rich.
"I was becoming too 'rich' for the kids from the neighborhood and too 'poor' for the kids at school." (Moore 53)
This quote is a perfect summary of the whole section. He was spending all of his time trying to fit in with two polar opposites, and he ended up fitting in no where. To close out this section, Moore describes how his dedication to fitting in eventually led to a derailment of his life, such as letting his grades slip.
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